08 March 2006
blue skin [all i ever wanted]
oh Neptunue, oh ship
oh cello, soft breast, i had a stroke
at sea.oh Venus, sometimes sex is
is so fucking painful
you have no idea [even for a fucker like me.down near th ships
sunset intrudes and a lonely man
takes off,leaves th beach
alone.orgasm hypothesis
sunset blue
notes red under ;oh glass me
under th sea,
melancholy.wait - there will be a story yet;against my will
i became desperate
for sadness, found a reason breathing
saltwater deep in, but there was no instant
message, no fight
nor air
just parasites. [ like a vampire
needs a stereotype ] deus me a’quivering
lay there
naked
under machina, goddess of
oil rigs.th cry of someone saw penguins – drift away
in a yellow submarinato club th’ice
shelf alone.# posted by hardyf : 23:51
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hardy, the first half of this poem is amazing, sexy, raw, and breath-taking. the second half is the sort of stumbling to the bathroom after stuff... not sure that 'quirky' is the right word, but definatly a bit fuzzy, a bit lack luster, and a bit dissapointing.
overall, like that really great lay you were expecting, was nothing spectacular after all, and you found out she's got a kid or something.
overall, like that really great lay you were expecting, was nothing spectacular after all, and you found out she's got a kid or something.
more a fantasy responding to the final fuck, katy. it was writ in current w/ the glass of merlot i was drinking, which also started out great. "the unspectacular lay" - that's good, sad tho.
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